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Friday, July 3, 2015

Reviews On "Lines"




Review Point
: 3.5
Author: Vaibhav Mukim
Publisher: Frog Books, Imprint of Leadstart Publishing Pvt. Ltd.
Genre: Fiction/Sci-fi Fantasy
ISBN: 978-93-84226-94-7
Edition: First, 2015
Page Count: 246


Platform:
Story is sci-fi and centralized over the lead role Sidharth and his ways to search the other worlds. This book consists of 2 major and 1 minor section containing 16, 34 and 11 chapters respectively. In the first part of the book, Sidharth finds himself trapped in the other ancient world and faces a lot of problems to be out from that hell of situation. In the second part, narration is about the present time and new world named Intelligentia. Sidharth carries the feeling of sadness of people and feels that nothingness is increasing which will overwhelm the world. On the other hand, in last part Sidharth feels that the world is going to its end and decapitates the rules of his dream.

Strength of the Book:
Mind blowing starting is given to the book with its prologue. Also mysteriously story goes ahead up to multiple chapters. Well set platform is tied with the story. Nice fantasy world is selected for narration. Proper separation is done of book in each part. Also, chapters are connected with each other very well. Endings of each section of the book are admirable. Moreover, this dialogue writing is really impressive. Each section is connected together very well by discussing earlier happening in amazing way. The way of epilogue presentation is very nice. It is connected meanwhile in the story which pointing towards the doing of writer.

Weakness of the book:
After half completion, story leaves the breaths and goes very slowly without any interesting narration. Unnecessarily chapters are elongated somewhere and many persons are introduced without any proper need which create confusion with the names and narration. Sentence repetition is visible in many of chapters. Lack of literature is also there.

Conclusion:
A nice book by Vaibhav Mukim. Author has presented the things pleasantly to grab the mind of every aged person. Each dot of the story is connected together. Though story is good but addition of literature could enhance the impression of book. Author has great potential to explore the things which are whether not familiar with the real world or lying somewhere in the dreams of readers.

Reviewing Point:
3.5 out of 5

Review By:
- Kamal Paneru

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